SPIDER-MAN
Scriptment
BY
JAMES CAMERON
FADE IN:
A geometrical pattern fills the screen.
Silver threads in
moonlight.
Part of a spider's intricate web.
It moves slightly and we see behind
it... the glint of an
eye.
Pulling back. Two eyes blinking
in the darkness, behind a
mesh of fishnet material.
Continue pulling back to reveal
a face. A face shrouded
in darkness, covered by a concentric
web-like pattern.
Behind the mesh we catch a hint
of the features. Not
much. It is the eyes which command
our attention.
Pulling back... head and shoulders.
A black night
background.
Wider still, revealing a muscular
silhouetted figure,
sitting cross-legged with zen-like
composure. The arms
are straight down, between the legs.
Behind the figure is
some kind of steel structure.
But wait. As we pull back, city lights
have come into
view, and now skyscrapers... but
they are above us.
Sticking down into frame like the
mothership in Close
Encounters. CAMERA ROTATES now,
180 degrees...
Putting the city where it belongs...
below us. And
revealing that the figure is hanging
by his hands, by a
thread-like wire... cross-legged
and chilled-out. Upside
down. He is wearing a form-hugging
body-suit. Hard to
make out the details in the moonlight.
Who is this
whacko?
Keep pulling back. The figure is
hanging, like a spider,
from a radio mast high above...
Manhattan. There are the
familiar landmarks... Pan Am and
Chrysler Buildings.
Empire State.
FIGURE (V.O.)
Welcome to one of my favorite night
spots.
The service is slow, but the thing
I like
about it... it's not usually too
crowded.
The Empire State building is lower
than us so there's only
one place we could be...
1400 feet above the street, on the
radio mast of the north
tower of the World Trade Center.
A quarter of a mile
below us, the traffic moves like
corpuscles of light
through the circulatory system of
the city.
FIGURE (V.O.)
It all looks so... civilized...
from up
here, doesn't it? Like there's some
kind
of logic to it all. It's all so
clear.
But you get down there on the street
and
nothing's clear.
THE STREET. Cabs and cops. People
on the move. Humanity
in all its variegated glory... from
stockbrokers to
hookers, priests to junkies.
A CORNER NEWSSTAND. Pushing in on
a stack of Newsweek.
Close on the top one. The cover
is a grainy, long lens
black and white shot, like a UFO
photo, of a guy in tights
apparently crawling up the side
of a building. The
headline reads: THE SPIDER MAN -
HERO OR VIGILANTE?
An arm, wearing red spandex and a
red glove, drops down
from the roof of the newsstand.
The news-guy whirls as
the arm slaps two bucks on the counter
and grabs a
Newsweek.
The owner rushes out the door...
looks on top of his
kiosk.
There's nothing there. He looks
up, all around...
nothing. He grins and holds his
fist in the air.
OWNER
ALRIIIIIGHT!
CUT TO THE FIGURE, atop the WTC.
Still hanging. He pulls
the Newsweek out of his belt and
stares at the cover in
the moonlight.
SPIDERMAN (V.O.)
How can I expect them to get it.
I don't
even get it. I do wish they'd at
least
get my name right. It's Spider Man...
not
The Spider Man. Jeez. Boneheads.
I need
a better publicist.
He rips the magazine easily in half,
then in quarters,
then in eights... somewhere in here
we realize that this
takes more strength in the hands
than you or I have. He
releases the stamp-sized shreds.
Camera drifts with them
as they flutter down over the city
like confetti.
SPIDERMAN
Wouldn't they have kittens if thy
knew
Spiderman wasn't even a man. Just
a kid
named...
PETER!
CLOSE UP on an elderly lady yelling.
"Peter... you're
going to be late!" It's morning
and she's calling up the
stairs to...
PETER PARKER. Age 17. Peter is in
the bathroom, popping
a zit in the mirror. He puts on
his glasses and checks
his look in the mirror. Still the
same. Nerdy. He
doesn't care. Screw 'em.
He grabs a big stack of books and
heads downstairs. Over
breakfast we meet his aunt MAY and
Uncle BENJAMIN. Nice
people but way too old to be the
kind of role-model
parents a kid needs. Still, he loves
them even if he
forgets to actually mention it 99%
of the time like any
kid.
Aunt May is thin and fusses over
Peter too much. He
indulges her. When he has time,
which he doesn't this
morning.
Peter's parents were killed in a
plane crash when he was
six. He woke up one day without
a family. Somehow he
always felt guilty that they went
away. As if he had done
something wrong. His 17 year old
mind tells him it was
just fate, just a random accident...
but deep in his
subconscious that scared 6 year
old still cries, begging
for them to come home... he won't
cause trouble anymore...
he'll go to bed when they tell him.
Uprooted, moved from the only home
he knew, in Maryland,
to Ben and May's modest bungalow
in suburban Flushing, NY.
It is a low to middle income boredom-zone
of tract homes
pushed too close together. Peter
actually goes to high
school in nearby Forest Hills, a
snotty high-income
neighborhood. This makes him a poor
kid from the wrong
side of the tracks in the eyes of
his status conscious
schoolmates.
Peter is a bright kid. He doesn't
have many friends. He
is ostracized for his interest in
science. Our MTV
culture frowns on people who think
too much. Intellectual
curiosity is decidedly un-hip. Who
cares about where the
universe came from or how the Greeks
hammered Troy? Did
you hear the new Pearl Jam album?
Peter is defiant. He thinks they
are the real losers.
They'll be flipping burgers while
he's discovering the
cure to cancer.
We'll see who wins in the long run.
He wears his isolation like a badge...
with an air of
superiority.
In fact, he is awesomely shy and
desperately lonely and
unhappy. But whenever this occurs
to him, he loses
himself in his studies, and finds
a kind of peace.
He has the 17 year-old's sense that
he knows everything
about the world, and can see so
clearly all the things
that are wrong with it. In fact
he is very insulated and
knows almost nothing about human
nature in all its
complexity. He doesn't even understand
himself very well.
Because his life of the mind is
his badge of superiority,
he frowns on the pursuits of the
body.
Sports? Forget it. Bunch of jock
boneheads crashing into
each other. Like stag elk in rut.
Senseless violence.
Girls? Good in theory, but how do
you talk to them?
Dancing? No way. He tried it once.
Not a pretty sight.
Peter is a virgin. And apt to remain
that way for a
while. He's your basic sexually
pent-up adolescent.
One other thing about Peter. He is
a plucky kid. He's
got true grit. He's never had an
opportunity to prove
this, to himself or anyone else.
But he will soon...
That day at school, we see Peter
with his friends, who are
mostly straight-A misfit types like
himself. In his last
class of the day... his favorite.
BIOLOGY... Peter
daydreams about the girl across
the room. Mary Jane
Watson. Peter is captivated by her,
though she doesn't
seem to know he exists. The teacher
tells them to pair up
for term science projects and to
Peter's surprise Mary
Jane comes all the way over to him
and asks to be his
partner.
Mary Jane needs at least an A in
the class, or she won't
graduate with a B average, and then
her parents won't buy
her a car like they promised. So
she teams herself with
Peter the Nerd. Mary Jane's girl-friends
in the class
exchange looks and smirks.
Peter flushes with the sudden proximity
of the girl he has
watched from across the room all
year. She even smells
good. He feels giddy.
Peter of course knows he has no hope.
Mary Jane is going
out with one of the school's top
studs... Nathan McCreery,
AKA "Flash". Nathan is a top athlete,
playing on the
senior football team and head of
the gymnastic team. He
is also a tennis snob and drives
a Porsche. Peter hates
him utterly, on general principles.
Peter takes the bus.
His aunt and uncle don't have much
money.
Mary Jane is a popular girl, in a
"sosh" clique, way out
of Peter's league. She has it all...
looks, money,
handsome boyfriend. Peter oscillates
between despising
her and fantasizing about saving
her from a burning
building so she will be eternally
grateful to him and
maybe even kiss him.
Peter is thrilled to be her partner
for the term project.
School lets out. Peter walks Mary
Jane out of the parking
lot. Flash comes zipping up in his
Porsche to pick her
up. In an awkward moment of condescending
generosity,
Mary Jane invites Peter to go with
them, to Flash's house,
to play tennis and swim in the pool.
Peter declines... he
has an honors-student science seminar
he's going to at a
nearby university. Anyway... he
doesn't want her to see
his pale skinny body next to Flash
the stud.
McCreery makes some offhand but cutting
remark about
Peter, then some of Flash's jock
friends get into it...
mocking him as well. Peter walks
away, humiliated.
LATER, at the seminar... Peter is
touring the genetics lab
of the university he hopes to attend
if he can get a
scholarship.
The lab has one of the nation's
leading research programs
on recombinant DNA and gene therapy.
As the tour moves through the lab
complex they are able to
get a glimpse of the restricted
area where some of the
more advanced research is done,
through sealed glass
doors. The professor shows them
video monitors which show
the images of bio-isolation flasks
where genetic
experiments are done on fruit flies.
He says they are "using synthesized
transfer-RNA to recode
the genome of the fruit fly... transferring
genetic
information from one species of
fly to another."
He points to the monitors, saying,
"You can see the ten
mutagenically activated flies on
the left, the ten control
flies on the right..."
Peter mentions that he only sees
nine flies on the left.
While the scientist is counting,
the camera moves to a
high corner of the room. Caught
in a spider's web, near
an air duct, is the tenth fly. The
spider approaches the
struggling fly and begins to dine.
Rack focus back to the
professor... as he continues the
lecture. They move on.
Peter asks if he can take some photographs
for his school
paper. The group moves on, leaving
him behind.
The tiny spider drops down from above
on a nearly
invisible thread. Peter, below,
is oblivious, as the
arachnid descends. It lands on his
hand as he is taking
his last shot. He feels a stinging
pain and sees the
spider. He smashes it. Stands rubbing
his hand. Then
hurries after the group.
Peter on the subway on the way home.
He is rubbing his
hand, which is red and swollen.
He is perspiring and
feels faint. His lips are dry.
By the time Peter gets home, his
vision is blurry. He
goes straight to bed... avoiding
Aunt May. He pulls off
his clothes and staggers toward
the bed, but collapses on
the floor.
He is wracked by a convulsive tremor,
like a seizure. He
is plunged into a psychotropic state...
an abyss of dark
visions which yawns beneath him.
He falls into the
maelstrom, barraged by hallucinatory
manifestations.
Disturbing images of webs... from
a POV as if crawling
over them. Glistening eyes in the
dark. Sudden predatory
lunges. Prey struggling hopelessly
to escape. A David
Lynch bio-horror montage of spiderworld.
Shadowy images
of rooftops... crawling over buildings
and fences.
Leaping through the dark air...
Peter awakens in the sunlight. He
opens his eyes,
relieved to be out of the nightmare.
That it was just a
dream. He blinks, looking around
and screams. He is
about 80 feet up a high tension
tower... wearing only his
underwear. Below him, morning traffic
moves along the
street. Nobody looks up.
CUT TO PETER sneaking along a fence,
trying not to be
seen. He hides in the bushes as
two girls from his class
go by. Deeply embarrassed and confused,
Peter makes it
back to his house.
He slips inside and gets ready for
school. He is pale and
shaky. He rushes past Aunt May and
Uncle Benjamin, saying
he is late. He goes outside, around
the house, and climbs
into a basement window. He goes
to a dark corner and
huddles there, shaking. His teeth
are chattering. He
hugs his knees to his chest and
drifts into semi-
consciousness.
His eyes fall on something moving
in a ray of sunlight
coming in the window. It is a spider,
descending on a
single silken strand.
To Peter it is like a heavenly vision,
the tiny figure
filling his entire consciousness
in some sort of
hallucinatory magnification. The
morning sun backlights
it and it seems to glow with a golden
radiance. It is
like some kind of divine messenger,
waving its legs slowly
as if trying to tell him something.
He is riveted by it,
hypnotized by its otherworldly beauty
and grace.
Peter comes in the front door of
the house after dark. He
passes the living room, telling
his Aunt and Uncle that he
has to study. They ask him if he's
okay. He says sure,
fine.
Peter looks in the bathroom mirror.
He looks normal. He
looks at his hands. They have stopped
shaking. It
appears to be over, whatever it
was. He rubs his wrists,
unconsciously. Rubbing his thumbs
over the insides of his
wrists. They hurt but who knows
why.
He notices suddenly that he can see
perfectly. But that
he is not wearing glasses. He rushes
into the bedroom and
puts them on... the world goes fuzzy.
He throws them
across the room. Rubs his eyes.
Wow! The poison cured
his myopia. Cool.
Peter goes to bed, exhausted by the
ordeal. He sleeps
soundly. The spider dream comes
again. This time rather
than a dark, roaring horror of confusing,
disjointed
images... it is more refined. An
aerial ballet of eerie
grace... the weaving of an orb-web
from the spider's point
of view. Shimmering geometry in
cold black space.
THE NEXT DAY. Tight on Peter as he
wakes up. He opens
his eyes cautiously. Not knowing
what to expect. PULL
BACK to reveal that he is still
in bed. All is normal.
He breaths a sigh of relief. In
fact... he feels pretty
good. Lots of energy. He pulls back
the covers and...
Something is causing the sheet to
stick to him. He lifts
it, revealing a sticky, white mass
completely covering
him, gluing him to his bedding.
It is some silky
substance webbing him into the covers.
He cries out in
dismay... struggling to free himself
from the gluey
strands. Where did it come from?
He notices his
wrists...
They are oozing a pearlescent white
fluid from almost
invisible slits about a quarter
of an inch long. He
pushes on the skin next to one of
the slits and... a dark
shape, the size and color of a rose-thorn...
emerges from
beneath the skin. It shoots a jet
of liquid silk into his
face.
Peter screams at the top of his lungs.
Aunt May comes to the door. "Peter,
are you alright?"
"Yes," he answers, nervously. "I'm...
fine, Aunt May. I
was just... uh... practicing for
a school play."
Aunt May says she's so happy that
he's getting into other
activities.
He gets out of bed and pulls the
silky webbing off
himself, realizing how strong the
stuff is. He looks
again at the horrifying "spinnerets"
on his wrists. He is
hyperventilating... freaking out.
Like the guy in Kafka's
Metamorphosis, he has woken up to
find out he is a bug.
Peter bangs out the back door of
his house. He starts to
run. Anywhere. Trying to get away
from himself. Away
from what is happening to him. He
runs and runs in a
blind frenzy, not realizing how
fast he is going.
Peter shoots through the trees. He burst out into a
street.
Right in front of a speeding delivery
truck.
Peter leaps. The truck roars on...
horn honking. Peter
realizes he is twenty feet above
the ground.
He yells in terror. He is sticking
to the side of a
perfectly smooth building, by his
palms two stories up.
Like a cat, stuck in a tree, he
doesn't know how to get
down.
A kid rides by on a bike.
Hey! Peter yells. Kid! Call 911!
The kid looks at him and rides off
fast. Peter gingerly
pulls one palm loose... then loses
traction and falls--
Landing with perfect catlike grace
on feet and hands. He
stands unsteadily.
What is going on? His body is changing.
Where will it
stop? He tests his arms and legs,
feeling the strange
energy pulsing through his muscles.
SEVERAL SCENES FOLLOW, of Peter realizing
his new physical
powers... strength and agility.
His horror begins to turn
to exhilaration as he finds himself
capable of things he
never dreamed of. He finds his skinny
body suddenly more
muscular, man-like. But beyond that
he has inhuman power
in his muscles... he picks up the
back end of a small car
by its bumper. Is he dreaming?
He finds a position of his hand which
seems to trip the
spinnerets in his wrist. Hand bent
back to 90 degrees,
index and pinky finger extended.
The fluid jets out under
pressure like a shot from a squirt
gun, instantly
hardening into a strand tougher
than nylon. He tests
it... can't break it. He even finds
that it will support
his weight. He realizes it is spider
silk. Peter shoots
some up a tree limb and hangs from
it. Starts swinging
back and forth... yelling with the
thrill of it.
CUT TO Peter at school, with his
sleeves pulled down...
nervously looking around. Nobody
notices him. He
realizes that even though the most
profound change
imaginable has happened to him,
no one else knows... or
needs to know. Which is good...
because he's already
enough of a misfit. No point letting
them know he's a
complete freak.
In biology class he tells the teacher
he wants to do the
term project on spiders. Mary Jane
is aghast. She thinks
they're revolting. Peter just wants
to know more about
them. Because he wants to know more
about himself. But
he can't exactly tell her that.
Peter, in a junkyard after school.
After making sure no-
one is around, he practices shooting
silk. MONTAGE of him
learning to control the flow, the
diameter, the dispersion
etc., like a real spider does. We
see him practicing web-
making.
Screwing up. Getting more accurate.
Then gunslinger
moves, shooting the stuff around.
Nailing a pop can in
mid-air.
Cut to long-shot... the area completely
covered in webs.
A total mess.
Cut to him drinking half a gallon
of milk. Eating
voraciously. Replacing the protein
he has used up. His
aunt is pleased with his appetite.
That night he is working on his homework,
trying not to
let this new reality ruin his life.
His window is open.
He looks out into the darkness.
It beckons to him. The blackness,
once a source of fear,
is now welcoming. He goes through
the window, into the
world of night. Instead of leaving
his home, he feels
like he is going home.
He climbs onto the roof. He can see
perfectly. He leaps
to the house next door. The heights
don't scare him in
the least. He takes off running...
TRACKING SHOT, going with Peter as
he leaps from roof to
roof... running along the peaks...
finally leaping to a
streetlight and doing a full flip
around it. He shoots
some webbing onto the lightstandard
and slowly lowers
himself to the street, landing perfectly.
He bows
theatrically to nobody.
This is great!
He doesn't know what's happening
to him, thinks he is a
freak, his body has become a stranger.
Hopefully this
will be seen correctly as a metaphor
for puberty and its
awakening of primal drives -- everybody
goes through this
growing awareness that powerful
forces are driving them
beneath their supposedly rational
consciousness.
SEQUENCE of Peter in the world of
night. Climbing sheer
buildings... exploring. Learning.
Leaping from roof to
roof to fire-escape to freeway overpass.
Just when he is starting to get cocky,
he slips off the
sheer face of a high-rise and falls.
He shoots a silk-
strand out wildly... it catches
on something and he swings
in a wild arc through the darkness.
He slams against
another building and sticks by his
palms and feet.
He takes a breath, looking down.
Close one, but he is
exhilarated. Wants to push it further.
It is the first
time in his life he has ever been
good at anything
physical. It is like a dream.
We explore the idea that the lure
of the dark replaces
fear of the dark... that the dark
becomes a comforting,
nurturing place for Peter, rather
than a place of dread
and uncertainty. He feels at home
in the dark, secure
there... it is the place he seeks
for solace, for peace.
Everything is backward for him.
Night becomes his day...
heights, previously terrifying now
attract him. The air
becomes his water, he swims weightless
where other mortals
would plummet and break.
He is at home in places others fear.
And it stirs something dark inside
him.
A predatory urge.
We see Peter following a figure far
below the street. He
runs along a rooftop effortlessly.
A shadow in the
moonlight. The person below has
no idea he is being
stalked.
We will hear Peter's thoughts (the
equivalent of the
thought-bubble word balloons) as
a voice over. He is
tripping on the power of being able
to come and go like a
wraith... to watch without being
seen. The ability to go
anywhere he wants without asking
permission. He feels
like an adult for the first time.
A man.
He goes to Mary Jane's house. Drop
down from the roof and
looks in her window. She turns off
the light, and
thinking she is unobserved, strips
off her clothes. She
slips into bed in just her panties
and a T-shirt. But
even this forbidden glimpse is too
much for Peter. He
loses his concentration and with
it his palm grip on the
wall. He crashes into the rose bushes.
He is bounding
into the darkness as lights come
on in the house behind
him.
CUT TO Peter, asleep in class. The
teacher calls him
aside as the class files out, and
asks him what is going
on. His grades are slipping. The
straight A student has
slipped off the track. Peter says
its a personal problem.
He should be fine. But we see that
he is changing. His
life is changing.
Peter figures there must be a way
for him to make some
money with his new-found powers.
Peter has a piece of cardboard and
a magic marker. He
writes Human Spider on the cardboard.
Thinks about it.
Naw. He turns it over and writes...
Man Spider.
Naw.
He gets another piece and writes
Spider Man.
Naw.
He turns it over to write something
else, then he turns it
back. Looks at it. Mmmmm.
Cut to the sign leaning against a
light pole on the
boardwalk Rockaway. Peter has a
black fishnet stocking
over his head, and dressed all in
black, starts climbing
street-lights and doing gymnastics.
People throw
quarters, and even some dollars
in a dish next the the
sign. Peter works a few hours, staking
out some turf
between a mime and a guy using upside-down
plastic pails
as drums.
A guy asks him if he works private
parties and Peter
shrugs, sure. The guy tells him
he'll pay fifty bucks,
but Peter should get a better costume.
Peter, in class... drawing in his
math notebook as the
teacher drones at the black-board.
He is doodling a
costume. We see several bad designs.
CUT TO Peter working on the costume.
He buys a snappy
lycra dance-skin at a dance studio.
It is red and
midnight blue. With liquid thread
he draws goofy web-
patterns all over it. A black spider
on the chest. And a
big red spider on the back. He tries
it on. Not bad. He
pulls the fishnet over his head.
It disguises his
features just enough. He cuts eye-shapes
out of black
material and glues them on... big
jack-o'-lantern eyes,
wise and a little wicked in their
shape.
Last, he makes wrist pieces out of
two old watch bands and
some cigarette lighters which he
silver-solders together.
They do nothing. He will tell everyone
he made these
high-tech wrist shooters which simulate
spider-silk. He
doesn't want them to think he's
a freak of nature. They
are situated in such a way that
his biological spinnerets
are just hidden, but unimpeded.
It looks like the silk is
shooting out of the wrist bands.
In front of the mirror he practices
poses. Turning.
Catching the light. He works on
his voice, lowering it.
We see him becoming another person.
Spider Man is born,
out of Peter the boy. Spider Man
is everything Peter is
not... confident, cocky. Physical.
Powerful. Smooth.
Ready with a snappy one-liner. We
see long-repressed
aspects of Peter coming out, being
given form and
substance behind the mask.
Aunt May, at the bathroom door, asks
Peter when he is
going to be done rehearsing for
the play... it's late.
Peter, flustered, whips off the
mask. He reverts
instantly to himself. The fantasy
broken.
Next we have a sequence of scenes
where we see Spider Man
become a public phenomenon. He does
his spider tricks at
an upscale party... climbing walls,
swinging across the
room. They pay him 50 bucks. A booking
agent sees him
and wants to put him on a public
access variety show... a
kind of Gong Show for weird acts.
He gets noticed, and
becomes a kind of 3 a.m. cult favorite.
His put-on deep
voice becomes natural to him. He
tells the interviewer
that he built his wrist-shooters
himself, and that the
webbing formula is a secret, but
that the chemical process
is similar to rayon.
CUT TO an opulent mansion in Manhattan.
Marble floors.
Priceless art on the walls. Camera
tracking through the
luxurious darkness, to a vast living
room with a fire
burning in an enormous fireplace.
One wall of the room is covered with
TV screens. A FIGURE
watching it from a high-backed chair.
Watching the
Amazing Spider Man on the variety
show. A hand appears
from behind the chair-back. With
a minute gesture (and no
remote) the hand commands the TV
screens, and they all
switch to the channel on which Spider
Man is performing.
Twenty images of Spider Man on cable
as...
The audience claps and the host makes
some backhanded
compliment. A joke at Spider Man's
expense. Peter, eager
to please, doesn't get it. He does
another trick. The
band strikes up and they go to commercial.
We reveal the figure in the chair.
This is CARLTON
STRAND. He is in his early forties
and exudes power from
every pore. He is wearing a very
expensive custom
tailored suit. His hair slicked
back, very GQ. His nails
are manicured. His watch is platinum.
He is the image of
vast wealth attained not inherited.
SPIDER MAN (V.O.)
Carlton Strand. You think Trump
was big.
This guy was bigger. There he was
sitting
like a big fat spider at the center
of
his web of power and megabucks...
and way
out at the edge he feels this little
vibration.
Strand's eyes are piercing, blazing
with a malevolent
intelligence. He waves one hand
minutely and the TV set
goes off. A man enters the room.
A square-jawed, solid
looking guy with a powerful build,
named BOYD.
STRAND
Find out everything you can about
this
Spider Man.
Body nods and exits.
CUT BACK TO SPIDER MAN hanging from
the radio tower of the
World Trade Center. We will return
periodically
throughout the film to this image
of him in his eyrie.
SPIDER MAN
But he wasn't always Carlton Strand
any
more than I was always your friendly
neighborhood Spider Man. At one
time he
was just a punk names Carl... a
two time
loser about to go down for the third
time.
It was about ten years ago that
Strand
got his cosmic tap on the shoulder...
TEN YEARS AGO, NEW MEXICO DESERT:
The wind is blowing sand across a
desolate stretch of
desert highway. It is dusk and storm
clouds have turned
the sky prematurely black. A single
car rocketing along
at high speed. Blue and red lights
come over the hills
behind it. Gaining.
Inside the car we see a younger and
very different Carlton
Strand. He has crummy clothes, a
four day beard and a
desperate look in his eye. He's
talking to somebody named
Bobby, trying to keep him calm,
but you hear the panic in
Strand's voice.
A view of the backseat reveals Bobby,
slumped in the seat.
Bobby has been shot in the stomach
and isn't holding up
his side of the conversation. The
desert rolls by unseen
by his staring eyes.
A Highway Patrol car pulls behind
Strand's stolen Mercury.
Strand fires a pistol out the window
at them. The running
gun-battle results in both cars
crashing spectacularly.
Strand leaps from the wrecked car,
as more cops appear
over the hill, lights blazing. He
runs out into the
scrubby desert clutching his pistol
and a couple stacks of
bills... the pitiful score from
their robbery gone sour.
ON STRAND, running. He reaches a
fence and climbs over
it. Nearby is a small cabin, with
a sign on it that says
"Lightning Field House". A man comes
out of the cabin,
yelling something at him. Strand
ignores him, running on
into the desert.
He comes upon a strange place a mile
further out. It is a
field of stainless steel towers,
straight rods over a
hundred feet high. There are hundreds
of them, in perfect
rows, covering two acres. It is
a conceptual art-piece...
a sculpture called "The Lightning
Field". Carl doesn't
know this. And he doesn't give a
shit. He stops amongst
the towers, exhausted.
The cops reach the shack and the
guy tells them they can't
go any further... the towers are
designed to attract
lightning and if there's a strike,
they'd be toast.
Strand sees lightning strobing through
the black,
turbulent sky. He crouches behind
a tower, panting,
gripping his gun. Ready to make
a stand. It is full
night now, a wild howling night
filled with the fury of a
desert storm. Thunder rolls across
the hills.
Suddenly the Lightning Field is struck.
As it was
designed to, it takes the energy
of the lightning bolt and
distributes it from tower to tower
until the whole thing
is blazing with blinding electric
arcs in a huge
rectangular matrix. Caught at the
center of it Strand is
crucified by lightning from every
direction. He is in a
vortex of electric fields never
before experienced by a
human being. It lifts him off his
feet with the power of
the charge. In tight close-up, we
see it arcing inside
his eyeballs. The money drops from
his hands... the bills
igniting into flaming moths that
swirl away on the wind.
The cops watch the gorgeous, terrifying
display.
Strand hits the ground, smoking
and motionless.
The cops, watching through binoculars,
know it is over.
It begins to rain, obscuring their
view. They get out a
thermos of coffee and settle in
to wait for morning.
ON STRAND'S BODY. Still. Then, incredibly,
he stirs. He
sits up, groggy and disoriented.
Strand escapes in the rain, finding
a dirt road through
the nearby hills. He comes to a
ranch house with a pickup
truck. He tries the key. Nothing.
He pops the hood and
looks... there is no battery. In
a rage he grabs the two
battery cables. The engine starts
to turn over. He looks
at his hands and realizes the voltage
is coming from his
body. He starts the car and slams
it into gear... tearing
out into the rainy night.
He begins to comprehend that somehow
he has been changed
by the powerful matrix of electric
fields. That he now
can generate a powerful charge,
like an electric eel.
CUT TO STRAND walking into a back-room
meeting of a few of
his hood acquaintances. It is weeks
later and they are
surprised to see him. They thought
he was dead.
He says he was. For a few minutes.
He got zapped by
lightning out in the desert. While
running from the cops.
Somebody set him up. The cops were
waiting when he and
Bobby pulled the job. You guys wouldn't
know anything
about that, would you?
He says he died in the desert and
came back... but he came
back changed. He grabs the leader
and stops his heart
with a zap to the chest.
Then Strand demonstrates his power
over life and death.
He puts his hands on the guy's chest
and yells, jokingly,
"Clear!" He zaps him again and the
crook's heart starts to
beat. He begins to come around.
Now they fear him. They start to
go for their guns.
Strand blasts them with powerful
bursts of electrical
energy, blowing them back against
the walls. They
collapse, their clothing on fire.
Only the leader is
left, the guy who set Strand up.
Strand is clearly in total command
of his new power. He
explains that there is more to it
than just being able to
generate, channel and project electrical
energy.
He can sense electrical energy as
well. The world to him
has been transformed. Instead of
matter, solid things, he
sees energy. A pulsing web of electric
fields. He can
sense the current in the wires in
the walls. By laying
his hand on a telephone wire he
can "hear" the
conversation. By touching a computer
he can download the
data from its hard-drive. His brain
itself has been
energized... and is now able to
follow and analyze all
these signals. The world is a pulsing
circulatory system
of electrical and electromagnetic
currents and waves. In
fact... he can't shut it out.
The real power, he says, is not force
but information.
Then force.
He kills the leader of the gang and
takes his place.
But he quickly realizes that the
kind of crime these guys
were involved in was at a penny-ante
level. The real rip-
offs were happening at a much higher
level... the multi-
billion dollar leveraged buyouts,
corporate takeovers,
offshore bank scams.
He takes the resources of the two-bit
crime syndicate and
takes them legit. Then using his
ability to steal and
manipulate data, he builds them
into a mega-player. He is
utterly ruthless, brilliant, feared.
And almost magical
in the way he knows everything that
is going on. Anyone
that stands in his way seems to
conveniently die of a
heart attack.
He considers the brute force display
of power to be
vulgar. The real power is the power
to move the world...
through control of economic forces
which are beyond the
realm of most people's imagination...
Donald Trump meets
Milken, mixed with homicidal psychosis.
He knows he is
unique in all the world, destined
for greatness, destined
to use the masses of everyday mortals
for his own gain.
CUT BACK TO PRESENT, in Strand's
mansion. A WOMAN enters
the room. She is stunningly beautiful.
The kind of
consort you would expect for a man
of wealth, power and
taste. This is CORDELIA. He motions
her to him and she
glides over, but stops a foot away.
STRAND
I must say, my dear. You look very
usable
tonight.
She smiles playfully. He circles
her, almost touching
her. His hands move over her...
inches from her skin. He
leans close and breathes in her
scent. But he can't touch
her.
She opens her silk robe. Underneath
she is wearing a
rubber wetsuit. He touches the rubber,
running his
fingertips over her. We hear a faint
crackling of
electricity. She seems both excited
and apprehensive.
STRAND
I want you. Not rubber.
CORDELIA
No, Carl--
STRAND
Yes!
Strand doesn't like the concept of
no. He takes her in
his arms and kisses her. With passion.
And more... her
hair stands straight out with the
electrostatic charge.
She begins to convulse, in tiny
shivers at first but then
like an epileptic. Suddenly she
goes limp. Her eyes
stare fixedly at the ceiling.
STRAND
Shit.
He drops her on a couch. Stands there
in misery and
isolation.
Strand has the midas touch. He has
everything and
nothing. His electrical sense gives
him the power to
manipulate computer bank transfers,
the stock market,
etc... to make himself a billionaire.
To sit at the
center of the world's great electronic
web and feel its
vibrations.
So he has everything.
But he cannot touch another person,
or shake hands,
without a great effort of will to
control his electrical
potential. And if he lets his guard
down, in an intimate
moment with a woman, he will kill
her with the high
voltage discharge. His love is deadly.
So he has learned
to live without love, without the
comfort of human touch,
emotion, contact.
So he has nothing.
He quickly unzips the front of her
wetsuit and puts his
hands under the rubber. ZAP! Her
body arches. He steps
back, scowling. Impatient. Her eyes
flutter open and she
struggles to breath.
CORDELIA
I don't know how much more of this
I can
take, Carl.
PETER STARTS slipping as a student,
missing sleep...
feeling the strain of a dual life.
The only subject which
has kept his attention is biology,
and he reads
voraciously on spiders... ostensibly
for his term project.
Mary Jane of course hates him for
volunteering them for
such a disgusting project. Thinks
he's a geek. He tries
to get her to see the beauty in
spiders... how perfect
they are, how amazing, how their
engineering is
astounding, how flawless they are
as predators... how
adaptable etc... how amazing their
web-making ability
is... with the equivalent strength
for its size greatly in
excess of steel... how they can
vary the width, speed,
texture, stickiness etc.
He tells her how some species actually
care for their
young. The mother spider can distinguish
the vibrations
in the web caused by her own young
from the movements of
prey of enemies... they "see" by
touch. Cobweb spiders
perform stroking motions on the
web to call their young,
and plucking motions to warn them
of danger.
Sometimes the mother cares for the
young spiderlings by
feeding them regurgitated food...
Mary Jane is grossed
out, looking at him like he just
crawled out from under a
rock himself. Somehow, in all this,
he manages to make
her laugh. She actually starts to
like him.
Peter is walking out of the school
with Mary Jane when
they are ambushed by Flash. He starts
to ridicule Peter,
then threatens him. Peter just clenches
his jaw and backs
away. Peter does not believe in
violence... and he has
never thrown a punch in his life.
It just wouldn't occur
to him.
Through a row of bushes he sees Flash
grab Mary Jane by
the arm and spin her around. They
are arguing. Flash
slaps her across the face. Peter
is so enraged his hands
snap a four inch tree limb without
him realizing it.
Flash is walking to his car after
gymnastics practice. It
is dark. A figure drops silently
down from behind him.
Flash spins and sees a guy in a
black fishnet mask.
Thinking it is a robbery, Flash
swings... only to grab his
own fist in pain. It was like hitting
oak.
Peter holds Flash with one hand and slaps him hard.
SPIDER MAN
How do you like it? Huh?
He slaps him again, backhand. Then
he cocks back his fist
and BLAM!
Punches Flash so hard he flies ten
feet. He picks him up,
gets him in a painful armlock...
marches him to his
beloved Porsche and slams him brutally
against it. He
pounds Flash into the car until
the jock collapses, semi-
conscious. Peter then rips a signpost
out of the ground
and pounds the car into junk. Glass
flies everywhere.
Peter leans close to Flash and tells
him to stay away from
Mary Jane... or else.
Cut to Peter running. He stops around
a corner, out of
sight. In darkness he stands panting...
looking down at
his hands. He rubs his knuckles.
SPIDER MAN (V.O.)
I wonder if every hero remembers
their
first punch. Well I do. Maybe it
was all
the bullies, over the years, kicking
the
skinny kid around. All that stored
up
rage just came out so fast it was
scary.
For a split second I just wanted
to kill
him. It's a good thing his car was
there.
I always hated that Porsche.
Peter is gasping, shaking with emotion.
He feels like
this strange power flowing through
him has unleashed
demons. That he is becoming something
he doesn't
recognize. He doesn't realize that
these primal forces
are within us all... and the power,
like the power of
adulthood... gives us the possibility
of acting on those
dark urges.
SPIDER MAN
But the scariest thing of all was...
belting that jock butthead felt
so good.
Peter takes the subway to Manhattan.
Changes in a rest-
room. Soon, Spider Man is roaming
the rooftops of the
most dramatic city in the world.
The high-rises of
Manhattan become his domain. He
swings across the
concrete and glass canyons, 40 floors
above the street,
with ease and grace. It becomes
a kind of private
odyssey, where he can go anywhere
and observe the entire
spectrum of human behavior like
a ghost. He sees
businessmen, cops, hookers, secretaries,
junkies, car
thieves, millionaires... all jammed
together in the
concrete maze. He watches, unnoticed,
through high-rise
windows... as a man screams at his
children, as a
beautiful woman works out, as a
middle-aged man drinks
himself into a stupor crying, as
a young woman plays with
a baby. His 17 year old mind can't
make much sense of it.
Why some have so much, others so
little. Why there needs
to be so much pain.
Peter comes into his room through
the window, in his
street clothes, at 2 a.m. He sits
on the bed... and the
door opens from the hall. Ben comes
in and sits in a
chair. He doesn't turn on the light.
BEN
I know I'm not very good at the
father
thing, Pete. You came into my life
twenty
years past my prime time... and
I know
you're wrestling with things now
that I
can't help you with much. I was
your age
once... I know, it's hard to imagine.
And it was the most painful, confusing
time of my whole life. I'm not going
to
pretend to have all the answers
for you,
but I want you to know we're here
for you,
May and I. You can talk to us. If
you're
having problems, we'll understand.
Peter watches his uncle fumbling
for the words. He
notices that Ben's hands are shaking.
He is touched. But
how can he tell them what's going
on in his head? Being a
teenager in the 90's is complex
enough... Ben is obviously
thinking drugs, sex, gangs... but
this Spider Man thing
would be impossible to explain.
He doesn't even
understand it himself. Because he
doesn't understand all
the forces at work in his mind,
conscious and sub-
conscious. He thanks his uncle and
tells him everything
is okay.
Ben leaves the room, knowing he has failed.
Peter unbuttons his shirt. Under
it is the Spider Man
costume. He looks at the spider
emblem drawn on his
chest. He takes the mask out of
his back pocket and holds
it in his hand. The eyes seem to
stare back at him.
CUT TO Spider Man, creeping around
a high-rise. He sees a
man and a woman arguing. The man
starts beating up on her
in a drunken rage. Peter can't stand
to watch. She cries
and tries to run but the guy catches
her... hits her
again. And again. The next time
he draw back his fist,
he feels something grab it and turns...
There is a guy in a mask there! Peter
decks the guy with
one punch. It feels good to make
a difference. To mete
out a little justice. To defend
the helpless...
Which is what he's thinking at the
exact moment the woman
smashes a frying pan down on his
head from behind.
WOMAN
Leave my husband alone!!
Now they're both beating on him,
and he retreats in
confusion. This spider Man thing
is going to be harder
than he thought. People sure are
complex. He has the
physical powers, but not the wisdom.
Yet.
Spying on Mary Jane, the girl of
his dreams. He discovers
that her home life is a living hell,
with mean-spirited
and abusive parents. Mary Jane is
desperately unhappy...
living behind her mask of the popular
girl. She has no
one to share her pain. Peter is
struck by the parallel in
their lives.
Peter makes the big time. A syndicated
variety show, on
one of the local independent stations.
The host
introduces Spider Man and nobody
comes on the stage. A
beat... and then Peter (in costume)
drops from the stage
ceiling right toward the audience,
which screams. Peter
swings and lands deftly on the stage.
He does some
amazing Spider stuff... swinging,
web-shooting,
acrobatics.
After his appearance on the show.
Spider Man is leaving
backstage when he is approached
by the most beautiful
woman he has ever met. Cordelia.
She appears out of the
shadows and hands him a note. It
says: THERE ARE OTHERS
LIKE YOU.
There is an address and time for
a rendezvous if he wants
to learn more.
He looks up and the woman is gone.
He runs out the
backstage door and sees her getting
into a limo in the
alley behind the studio. He reaches
the car just as it is
pulling away.
Suddenly a hand grabs him and spins
him around.
He confronts a solidly built guy
in a trenchcoat, a hat
pulled down to shadow his mean eyes.
BOYD. His hands are
huge.
Peter tries to shrug off the grip,
and is surprised that
he can't. He punches Boyd in the
stomach... but his fist
sinks in up to the elbow. He pulls
his hand out and sees
that it is covered with... Sand.
Huh??!!
Enter Sandman.
Boyd slams Spider Man in the jaw
with a roundhouse
haymaker. It feels like concrete.
That's because Sandman
can soften his body into sand, or
harden any part of it
into rock, at will.
Spider Man is slammed back against
the alley wall. Boyd
clips him again, then gut-punches
him, doubling him over.
One more solid roundhouse and Peter
is on his knees,
gasping.
He looks up, groggily. He know this
guy is more than
human. Peter yells and leaps up,
putting all the force he
has into a roundhouse which could
go through the side of a
truck.
It catches Boyd squarely in the
face...
And goes right through. There is
an explosion of white
sand.
Boyd's face shifts and reforms.
He brushes at the sand on
the lapel of his coat. Then laughs
eerily.
His face dissolves again, into sand,
which runs down...
his whole body losing its form,
dropping into a puddle of
sand, which drains through a grating
down into some tunnel
below the alley. Only the coat and
hat remain, and a few
grains of sand blowing in the wind.
Peter is dumbfounded. He is not alone.
There are others
with strange powers. But it is cold
comfort if they are
bastards like this sand-guy. He
limps down the alley to
where he stashed his clothes and
then climbs into the
night.
The next day Peter learns that making
money as Spider Man
is harder than he thought. The TV
shows can't pay him
cash, so he has the sleazy booking
agent cash the checks
for him. Peter gets his uncle Ben
to drive him to the
booking agent's building, under
some pretense. He goes in
alone and changes into his costume
in a restroom. Peter
goes in to collect his money and
the guy is broke, out of
business. The guy tells him to beat
it.
SLEAZY AGENT
Go ahead. You want to call the cops...
Call 'en. I'm sure they'll be happy
to
press charges for you. The second
you
take off the stupid mask and show
them
some ID.
Peter doesn't want anyone to know
who Spider Man is. He
doesn't want to be revealed as Peter
Parker, the freak.
He wants to spare his aunt and uncle
the humiliation. As
long as his identity is secret,
then people can go on
thinking the web-shooters are man-made
gizmos... and not a
part of him which he can not take
off.
As Peter is leaving, he encounters
a robbery in progress
on the same floor. The thief is
wearing a ski-mask. He
does a double take at Peter... two
masked guys staring at
each other. Peter notices the thief
has a tattoo of a
cobra on his hand.
The thief runs past him, and down
the stairs. A security
guard runs up... a fat guy who has
no chance of catching
the criminal. He recognizes the
Spider Man costume and
tells Peter to go get the guy because
he can't. Peter,
dejected and pissed off, shrugs.
SPIDER MAN
It's not my job.
Peter secretly changes and returns
to the parking lot to
meet his uncle Ben...
Only to find a small crowd of people
gathered around
someone lying on the ground. It
is his Uncle. He has
been shot in the chest by a car-jacker
who pulled him out
of his car and took off. Peter watches
him die before the
ambulance gets there.
A random crime. Senseless. Hard to
solve.
Peter becomes obsessed with finding
his uncle's killer.
Using his Spider Man skills he begins
a one-man manhunt.
For the first time we see him using
his new powers for a
non-selfish end. He spies on the
police, taking what they
know and following his own leads.
He tracks the guy down to a warehouse
and goes in to get
him. Peter drops into the room with
the guy... who laughs
when he sees him.
KILLER
Well. The fag in tights. We keep
bumping
into each other.
Without warning the guy grabs a gun
and shoots at Peter,
who reacts without thinking, actually
dodging the bullet.
The thief keeps firing and Spider
Man moves like
lightning, dodging the rounds as
he leaps... firing his
web and jerking the gun out of the
guy's hands. He grabs
the killer and slams him against
the wall... wanting to
pound the life out of him. He hauls
back his fist to
smash the guy's face in...
And sees the cobra tattoo on the
back of his hand.
FLASHBACK: The guy in the hall.
The tattoo. The guard
telling him to catch the guy.
Peter realizes it is the thief who
ran past him in the
building. If he has stopped him
then, his uncle would
still be alive. He could have done
it. The power, the
speed, the strength, to do it...
all his now. But he
didn't use it responsibly. The crushing
weight of the
responsibility that goes with power
suddenly descends on
him.
He releases the guy, his anger gone.
He is overwhelmed by
guilt. He raises his hands and shoots
webbing all over
the guy.
CUT TO two cops driving through the
park. Spider Man
drops down in their headlights,
with the killer over his
shoulder. He slams the guy, bound
in webbing, onto the
hood of the car and tells them he
is the killer of Ben
Parker. Peter expects to see some
justice done...
But the cops aren't about to take
the word of some whacko
in tights. The killer is wailing
and trying to get free,
saying this crazy guy tied him up,
HELP! The cops tell
Peter to pull off the mask. He won't.
They tell him to
come to the station with them. They
put handcuffs on him
and start to take him in. Peter
becomes furious... that
he is being treated like the criminal,
when he has solved
the crime and brought them the murderer.
When he resists,
the cops get rough.
Spider Man breaks the handcuffs and
hurls the cops away
from him. They land on the pavement,
and go for their
guns. Peter, cursing, leaps into
the darkness, catching a
streetlight, swinging up to a rooftop,
and vanishing. The
bruised cops are amazed.
That night a local TV station, owned
by J. JONAH JAMESON,
runs a story on the evening news
that two cops were
assaulted by the mysterious character
known as the Spider
Man.
Thus begins Spider Man's feud with
the cops and Jameson,
his media nemesis. This can be developed
over ensuing
scenes as Peter accepts the mantle
of crime-fighter.
Peter goes after criminals now with
a vengeance. He wants
the world to have some justice...
something that seems to
be lacking everywhere he looks.
Spider Man becomes a one-man anti-crime
wave. He goes
after crooks so single-mindedly
and viciously that we fear
for him... for what he is becoming.
He seems to feed on
it, going a little nuts. He makes
enemies of virtually
everybody. Except for a few grateful
victims or near-
victims. Maybe it was all those
years of being the
helpless geek, kicked around by
the schoolyard bullies,
with no one to protect him. No father.
No older brother.
Now he wants to be the big strong
older brother to the
world. Fix it all. Let there be
no more victims... no
more pain. As long as he has this
strength, these
senses... he's going to go for it.
One night he sees cops beating the
shit out of a guy.
He intervenes and webs up the two
cops.
Now spider Man is officially a wanted
criminal.
And Peter has crossed the line...
with the realization
that justice is something that exists
only in the mind...
not in a uniform or a badge or any
symbol which our
society sets up to represent it.
And now, as a felon, he can't make
any more public
appearances for money. He's back
to square one... broke.
Peter feels outcast, persecuted,
misunderstood...
answerable only to himself... and
he doesn't have the
answers. He is alone in a moral
wasteland, without a map
or compass. He is totally isolated...
with no parents to
talk to, with no one to confide
in who would understand
what's going on inside him.
He needs someone to tell him what
to do, what to be. And
there is no-one. He tries to ignore
his powers... and the
path of non-commitment is the guilt
and pain of his
uncle's death. He realizes he must
accept responsibility
and use his gifts, but how?
The cops want him. He can't go work
with them. Does he
ignore the crime and injustice going
on around him or
become a vigilante?
When he stops criminals in the act,
the cops hate him more
for making them look ineffective.
He is condemned in the media as
a vigilante.
J. Jonah Jameson, using the media,
shades the story,
creating a threat... going for the
dark side, peddling
fear. Fear of the spider, which
lurks in the dark.
And fear sells. Jameson is getting
ratings. It's a good
story and he's going to work it
as long as he can.
Oh, and incidentally... he still
has to deal with the
actual bad guys themselves, who
want him dead. He's
hurting their business. He's got
them looking over their
shoulders. All the gangs in the
city, and the mob, the
crack dealers, the Colombians, everybody...
they all have
a grudge against this guy.
At the same time, in some neighborhoods,
he is a local
legend. Crime is down, and the friendly
neighborhood
Spider Man is a welcome sight. And
everybody wants to
claim him.
Black kids think he's black. White
kids white. Hispanic
etc.
"Spidey man ain't no white dude.
He too down. What I'm
sayin. You see his moves? He definitely
a brother."
"No way, home. My brother knows
a guy that talked to him
once, man."
Italians say he's Italian.
Gays think he's gay.
Peter, working with Mary Jane to
finish the science
project, discovers that she is a
big Spider Man fan. She
thinks he is mysterious and romantic...
someone with
courage and conviction. And she
relates to his need for a
mask. To keep his inner self private.
Peter wants so much to tell her...
but he can't now that
he is a wanted criminal.
He follows her after school and she
goes by herself to her
private place. The place she goes
to think. None of her
friends even know about it. He watches
her from a high
place.
ON MARY JANE, walking home. She is
being followed by some
punks. They accost her. There is
no one around to help.
She screams and they drag her off
the street into an
abandoned junk-yard.
Suddenly, Spider Man is there. He
trounces the attackers
and webs them up. He knows by now
that without a crime
actually taking place, the cops
won't even hold these
guys, so all he can do is warn them.
SPIDER MAN
If you worthless chunks of vomit
show
your faces around here again, I'll
decorate my Christmas tree with
your
intestines. Got it?
They get it. They're still worthless
chunks of vomit, but
at least they'll be somewhere else.
He picks Mary Jane up and whisks
her through the air,
swinging from roof to roof. It is
a wild fantasy ride for
her... like a dream. He takes her
to the top of the top
of the world... literally. The stainless
steel globe from
the '64 World's Fair in Flushing
Meadow Park. They sit up
there in the moonlight. she melts
against him. And with
the confidence which the mask gives
him... he kisses
her... through the fabric. It is
a tender, sensuous
moment.
PETER, in costume, goes to the rendezvous
point. He is
met by Cordelia and Strand. This
begins the most
important relationship of the film.
Strand is looking for others like
him. Exceptional
people, people who have been touched
by fate, through some
cosmic fluke. People who have been
given some power which
elevates them above the teeming
masses. He describes
finding Boyd, who was doing nickel
and dime bank jobs with
his new powers as Sandman.
Boyd apparently was a low-paid maintenance
man at a big
military research project having
something to do with SDI.
They were experimenting with a quantum
physics effect
called bilocation. They thought
they could find tunnels
in the fabric of space, and transpose
matter between the
two ends of the tunnel... essentially
teleportation. And
this would be a really neat way
to deliver a weapon
payload to the bad guys, inside
deep bunkers etc.
Well, Boyd was fixing some pipes
in a service tunnel under
the main floor of the experiment
and nobody told
maintenance that day that they were
going to test the big
collider that generates the bilocation
effect.
Somehow, things went wrong. There
was a runaway reaction,
then an explosion, and Boyd got
hit by the effect. He
transubstantiated with the sand
underneath him in the
crawlway. His molecules and the
sand molecules took on
each other's characteristics.
Boyd wasn't happy about what happened.
Especially when he
told the project doctors and they
wanted to lock him up
and study him. So he dissolved under
the door, and
escaped. They even tried to shoot
him... but the bullets
went right through. He turned from
a mean-spirited little
guy with no power to a mean-spirited
guy with incredible
physical power. Needless to say
he wasted no time abusing
it.
FLASH BACK SCENE: Boyd robbing an
armored car. The guards
fire into his body, but only puffs
of sand mark the exit
wounds. He turns his fist into a
rock-hard sledge-hammer.
It actually looks like a sledge-hammer.
He swings it,
knocking the guards flying. In a
fury he beats his way
through the steel doors of the truck
and takes the money
bags.
CUT TO: Boyd in a cheap hotel. On
the lam. He has some
stacks of money from the robbery
on a dresser. A tough-
looking girl is in bed next to him.
He is drinking vodka
straight and looking about ready
to eat a snake.
He gets up to find another bottle.
The girl brushes
distastefully at the sand in the
bed. She hates sand in
the bed.
There is a knock and Boyd warily
answers the door.
It is STRAND.
IN THE PRESENT, Strand describes
how he took him in, and
showed him a better way. How the
real money was made.
Now Boyd is Strand's right-hand,
his enforcer. He
apologizes for Boyd's behavior the
other night, but he
felt it was necessary to get Spider
Man's attention.
Frankly, he was curious to see if
Spider Man had the balls
to fight back when the adversary
was as strong as he was.
Peter realizes how much he has changed.
How much the mask
has changed him. He did fight back.
He acted on his
anger... and his anger made him
fearless.
What does Strand want? Somehow he
senses, though he does
not know who Spider Man really is,
that he is young.
Strand wants to take him under his
wing. Teach him.
And Peter, needing a father figure,
is seduced by this.
Strand has had years to ponder the
nature of his gifts,
and he is so brilliant. The things
he says make so much
sense.
Strand believes that they are extraordinary
individuals
joined by fate. That's why he sought
out the Sandman...
and now wants Spider Man to join.
Out of 5 billion
people, they are the special ones...
not freaks, but
masters... each created by a fluke
of technology. It is
some new form of evolution.
Strand invites him to the Manhattan
mansion. Peter has
never seen such opulence. Strand
sips a martini and
strokes the electric eels in his
huge aquarium. Peter
stares around at millions of dollars
worth of art and
antiques.
Strand says the whole Spider Man
costume and character are
pretty juvenile, and wants to know
who he's really talking
to here. He asks him to remove the
mask but Peter won't.
Strand expands his vision of the "special ones".
The huddled masses exist, in their
vicious ignorance and
limitations, to lift a few exceptional
people on their
shoulders. However unwillingly.
That's what human evolution is all
about... the highest
common denominator, not the lowest.
Natural selection honors the efficient
predator. And
Spider Man has the instincts of
a predator. The top of
the food chain is always held by
the most advanced
predators that millions of years
of evolution could
produce... noble creatures like
the wolf and the lion, not
the cud-munching herd beasts...
We honor competition right? We honor
winners.
But for every winner there must
be a thousand losers.
It's a law of nature. So you must
ask yourself... am I a
winner? Or a loser?
It is the temptation of power. A
carefully rationalized
seduction. But Peter also sees a
kindred spirit in
Strand. A gifted and misunderstood
outcast. Alone.
Peter feels so alone he needs that
companionship. And it
keys in psychologically... the father
figure. The older
brother.
Someone who understands him.
Cares about him. Doesn't think he's
a freak.
We are more than human, you and I.
Not less. We deserve
whatever we can take. It is the
only true law. The law
that existed for half a billion
years before the laws of
man.
Cordelia comes on to Peter, trying
to get him to relax.
Strand watches as Cordelia does
her thing. Peter is
starting to get a bad vibe. Strand
takes him aside and
says if Peter joins him he can have
his fill of Cordelias,
they come with the territory.
Strand holds a lightbulb by its base,
between two fingers.
He holds it over Peter's head and
makes it glow.
STRAND
Starting to get the idea, kid?
Spider Man says he's not interested
in a girl with values
that screwed up, and he's not sure
he likes Strand any
more either.
Strand makes the mistake of going
too fast. Of assuming
that Peter will accept his amoral
view of the world
immediately. When Peter finds out
that Strand is a crook,
he says they are enemies. Strand
says Spider Man cannot
afford any more enemies. As a demonstration
he blasts
Peter across the room with a bolt
of power, stunning him.
He tries to remove Peter's mask,
but Peter fights back.
He dodges energy blasts by leaping
to the ceiling, the
walls, etc. Each blast cost Strand
millions as he
destroys his own place, growing
more frustrated as he
tries to hit Peter and can't. The
spider sense is keeping
him just out of the line of fire.
Boyd comes in and the carnage intensifies.
Peter gets
zapped and almost loses consciousness.
He shoots a web,
snagging the huge aquarium, and
topples it in an explosion
of glass and thousands of gallons
of water which cascades
around Strand's feet. Strand is
temporarily shorted out.
The eels flop helplessly.
Spider Man ducks the Sand Man's blows
and leaps through a
window out into the night. Boyd
cannot follow.
Strand looks around the demolished
room. He is pissed off
but intrigued.
He picks up some of Peter's stray
webbing. Pulls on it
with all his strength. Can't break
it. Hmmmm.
Strand begins a campaign to win Spider
Man.
First he buys the TV station and
gives J. Jonah Jameson
and unlimited budget to bash Spider
Man.
STRAND
Here is what you will do. You will
fixate
on Spider Man. You will devote every
program solely to him. You will
not rest
until this psychopath is arrested
and his
identity is revealed. He is a menace
to
the public. Trust me, your ratings
will
soar.
He gets stories on network, and into
major magazines and
papers owned by his media conglomerate.
Strand's agenda is to make the world
such a hostile place
for Spider Man that Spidey will
be driven back to him.
Strand can say, see how fucked up
people are? See how
frightened and dangerous they can
be? He wants to sour
Spidey on humankind.
Then he wants to be there for him,
as the only one who
understands what it is to be different
from the herd. To
be truly alone.
He even gets thugs to dress up in
knock-off Spider Man
costumes and rob stores, beat people
up. Push down old
ladies. There is a proliferation
of Spider Man sightings,
all negative.
Now even the neighborhood people
don't trust Spidey. When
he tries to help they tell him to
get lost.
To make matters worse, his costume
got wrecked in the big
fight with Strand and Sandman. Can't
be fixed. He goes
looking for a new suit and...
Incredibly, Spider Man has become
so popular that his
costume is available in a specialty
store for 120 bucks.
They even have his size. Peter shrugs
and buys it. What
the heck. It's made better than
his old one anyway.
He gets the flu one day and he still
has to go out and do
the Superhero bit. He's swinging
from building to
building and has to stop on a ledge
and throw up. A black
kid sticks his head out.
KID
Hey yo, hey yo, Spidey. S'up, man?
SPIDER MAN
I've got the flu.
KID
Hey yeah. 's'goin' around , man.
The kid goes back in. His mom asks who you talking to?
KID
Spidey got the flu, mama. He puking
on
the fire escape.
MOM
Well you tell him to "spidey" his
ass on
over to the next building and throw
up
there. Shit, it's bad enough with
the
wino's in the neighborhood...
Peter is disheartened by the ungrateful
response of the
general populace to his well-meant
attempts. And then he
hits a string of bad luck, where
his intervention makes
the situation worse, because of
his lack of experience in
human affairs... the sheltered science
nerd gets a rude
education in the ways of the world.
He comes in contact
for the first time with the pain,
desperation, and
frustration which causes criminal
behavior.
Peter will have a crisis of faith,
where the burden of the
world's ills becomes so overwhelming
that he feels
paralyzed. His new power is partially
about the power to
see, and the responsibility to not
turn his head away --
he can go into the shadows, look
in the windows, watch us
all from above... and he will see
human nature for what it
is. He will enter a moral twilight
zone where the victims
and the crimes are not so clear
cut, where it is hard for
a well-meaning crusader to jump
in and help or save when
the victims must be saved from themselves,
or from a
society which grinds them down.
And how can one man, one
boy really make a difference? The
tide of injustice and
pain is too great... too overwhelming.
Like an avalanche thundering down
on him... until he
starts to think there are no good
people to save. Only
varying degrees of bad. That the
whole city is a toilet
of greed and dark passions.
He busts some thieves only to find
out that they are just
a bunch of kids, like himself. One
of the kids runs,
trying to escape, and slips off
a fire-escape. Peter
tries to catch him but he can't.
The kid hits the street
and dies.
Just kids. Needing some money in
a tough world. Just
like him. The line between good
and evil is getting
blurred.
Aunt May can't make the house payments
on just her social
security check. Now with medical
bills piling up. Peter
is going to have to get a job. Let's
see... there's Pizza
Hut. Or the car wash. Or... mmmm.
There's always the
20,000 dollars in twenties and fifties
sitting on the
coffee table of the drug-dealer's
house he just dropped in
on.
There won't be any objection from
the drug dealers, who
are all webbed up and waiting for
the cops (who will take
credit for the bust).
And there's the money.
Go on, take it.
Aunt May needs that operation. Her
medicare won't cover
it.
Why should she suffer in pain? Maybe
die?
There's the money. Nobody would
know.
Spider Man can move like a ghost.
And Peter would have a little extra
cash.
Stop having to ride a moped or take
the bus.
He could buy a car... and take a
girl on a real date.
That would show those sosh buttheads
with the dentists and
lawyers for dads... the smirking
laughter of all the
Mindys and Mandys and Sandys would
finally stop ringing in
his ears.
He is hovering on the brink of going
over the line... of
becoming a criminal himself. He
sees the opportunities
right in front of him. It would
be so easy.
CUT TO: TOP OF THE WORLD TRADE CENTER...
Spidey's lonely vigil. Still hanging
upside down, over
the world of bright lights and chaos.
SPIDER MAN
I figured being your friendly
neighborhood Spider Man would get
easier
as I went along. Well... I'm waiting.
CUT TO SPIDER MAN, his hands reaching
slowly for the stack
of bills. He looks into the eyes
of the drug dealer.
SPIDER MAN
What the hell are you looking at?!
He leaps out the window with the money.
CUT TO next morning. A parking lot
in a bad neighborhood.
Asphalt, chainlink and graffiti.
Kids playing basketball.
Suddenly hundreds of bills come fluttering
down into frame
like green snow, scattering far
and wide on the wind. The
kids chase the bills up and down
the block. It is an
instant celebration in the whole
neighborhood. Somebody
looks up in time to catch a glimpse
of a red and blue
figure swinging between rooftops.
SPIDER MAN (V.O.)
What was I gonna do? Track down
all the
crackheads and give it back? Anyway,
I
figure there's more than one way
to be a
saint in this world. But I've gotta
tell
you, even fighting Sandman was easier
than turning that bag upside down.
Meanwhile, Strand is analyzing the
Spider Man sightings
and incidents. He of course, knows
which ones are real
and which are faked to discredit
Spidey. He has his
analysis people plot everything
on a map of the greater
New York area and they see quickly
that Spider Man's
activities seem to center on Queens.
Strand tells his
minions to concentrate their search
there.
CUT TO Mary Jane doing a TV interview.
She is introduced
as a local high-school girl who
actually met and talked to
the Spider Man. She has come forward,
she says, because
she is outraged by the beating he
is taking in the media.
Spider Man saved her, she says,
and he is a kind, gentle
man. He is a hero, and we should
be thankful he is here.
MARY JANE goes alone to her private
spot. She is sitting,
thinking, when she hears something
behind her. She turns
as Spider Man drops down to her,
and gasps, startled by
his sudden presence. She feels a
rush of excitement as he
offers his hand to help her up.
SPIDER MAN
Do you still trust me?
Her answer is a kiss. Sweet and soulful...
their lips
separated by the sheer fabric of
the mask. She can feel
his breath on her face.
MARY JANE
Where are we going?
SPIDER MAN
It's a surprise.
CUT TO: The Brooklyn Bridge. A stunning
aerial shot. A
tiny shape swinging in an arc, racing
past the support
cables, sweeps toward us. It is
Spidey, with MJ in his
arms. He shoots another web strand,
swings to one of the
stone towers, and races up the side.
She is light as a
feather in his arms. She screams
like a kid riding
Colossus, in fear and exhilaration.
They pass us. Her screams continue,
fading as he carries
her up to the dizzying heights above
us.
ON TOP OF THE BRIDGE TOWER. Hold
a beat. We hear screams
approaching. Spidey appears and
sets her on terra firma.
She clings to him, looking down
and around in wonder.
He has put the world at her feet.
She can't believe this is happening
to her.
In a dizzying down-angle we see how
the suspension cables
all meet radially at the top of
the tower... like the
treads of some vast spider web.
Peter and MJ seem to sit
at the very center of the web, surrounded
by the lights of
the city. It is a warm spring night.
And the moment is
pure magic.
She stands with her back against
a girder, needing to feel
something solid. Spider Man stands
before her, a
perfectly formed male silhouette
with a soothing low
voice.
SPIDER MAN
Courtship among the spiders is highly
ritualized. It varies from species
to
species. The male spider may circle
the
female, or wave his front legs...
to
signal that he is not prey.
Spider Man moves in a hypnotic arc
around her. He raises
his hands in a dance-like movement.
Lowers them.
SPIDER MAN
The female usually signals her
willingness by an uncharacteristic
passivity.
MJ takes a deep breath. Her lip trembles.
Her knees are
weak. Her eyes, though, are steady,
gazing at the
silhouette before her. She doesn't
move of speak. He
moves closer.
SPIDER MAN
In certain crab spiders, such as
Xysticus,
the male will attach strands of
silk to
the female... tying her limbs...
Spider Man moves his hand gracefully
across her, and she
sees the sheerest silk webbing glinting
in the moonlight.
First one wrist. Then the other.
Hypnotic movement in
the moonlight. Her arms are bound
to the wall. Her
breathing gets more rapid.
SPIDER MAN
Since the female can break free
at any
time, the bonds have only symbolic
significance.
MARY JANE
The male must be very bold... to
take
such liberties with the predatory
female.
SPIDER MAN
Yes. He is very bold. But he must
also
trust her.
(he moves very close)
Close your eyes.
He removes his mask and kisses her.
Their mouths very
slowly and very sensuously devour
each other.
Peter and MJ are locked together.
He is mesmerizing,
gentle, powerful. He pushes up her
skirt. They make
love, high above the world.
She doesn't look.
CUT TO MARY JANE the next day at
school. She is humming
happily as she lets a tarantula
walk over her arm in the
science room. Two of her sosh girl-friends
come up and
are completely grossed out. They
talk about Peter Parker
having a negative effect on her,
that she's becoming a
nerd like him. She laughs at them
and tells them exactly
how full of shit they are.
We see that she is becoming more
confident herself... more
able to be different. The brushing
need for acceptance
has been lifted. Her mask is not
important anymore.
CUT TO STRAND, in his luxurious living
room. Boyd is
showing him a videotape he shot
the night before. It is a
shaky, long lens shot, quite amateurish.
We see Spider
Man drop down to MJ, startling her,
then he and MJ
kissing. Finally he hoists her in
his arms and swings off
into the darkness.
Boyd says he followed the girl for
two days, but it paid
off. Looks like she's this spider
geek's main squeeze.
Carlton Strand just nods. Thinking.
The Sandman comes to MJ that night
and puts her to sleep.
When the chloroform wears off, she
wakes up at Strand's
place.
A prisoner.
When MJ turns up missing, Peter goes
to her house. He
finds traces of sand in her room,
and figures out what has
happened.
At that moment, Jameson is airing
a tape which was
submitted anonymously to the station.
It is Boyd's tape,
but the kiss has been edited out
so what you see is Spider
Man dropping down, surprising MJ,
and then whisking her
off into the darkness. The announcer
says police have no
other leads in the case of the missing
girl, and this tape
is compelling evidence that Spider
Man may have kidnapped
her.
Meanwhile, Peter swings into action
as Spider Man.
Various action shots of him swinging
from skyscraper to
skyscraper. Eating up the miles
across town.
He arrives at the mansion in midtown.
He searches the
mansion... can't find them. But
he finds Cordelia dead.
Strand was in a hurry, didn't have
time to jumpstart her
after his farewell kiss. The huge
bank of TV monitors all
show the same image. It is Strand's
smiling face... held
in PAUSE from a VCR.
Peter hits PLAY.
Strand pulls MJ into the frame with
him. He says meet him
at the top of the World Trade Center.
A second later the doors are kicked
in. SWAT team members
pour into the room. Another set-up.
The SWATs see Spider Man, the body... it looks bad.
SPIDER MAN
Sorry boys. Can't stay.
They open fire and Peter leaps, spins,
ducks... barely
escapes. He swings across the room
in a vicious arc,
swooping up and crashes out through
a sky-light. In mid-
air, surrounded by broken glass,
he fires a web and
catches a flagpole... swinging across
the street, as...
A Police helicopter swoops toward
him...
Cutting his web, and...
He falls ten stories, shooting strands,
missing...
Shooting one, which catches and
he does a bungee bounce at
a hundred miles an hour... straight
back up...
He spins around a horizontal flag-pole
sticking out the
side of a building and launches
himself across the street.
Now he's in the groove, swinging
across town like a Spider
Man should.
ON THE NEWS, the manhunt for Spider
Man is the top story.
His escape from the police, the
kidnapping of Mary Jane
Watson, and now the murder of Cordelia...
it's all
stacking up against him. Live feeds
from news helicopters
show cops in the streets, police
helicopters circling.
One of the copters even got a fleeting
shot of Spider Man
on the move, in the canyon between
two rows of buildings.
But they lost him.
PETER reaches the World Trade Center
towers. He starts to
climb... racing up the sheer metal
face of 2 WTC like he's
never climbed before.
He crashes through the glass into
the observation deck
(closed). There he confronts Strand,
who is holding MJ.
Peter tells him to let her go and
Strand shrugs.
STRAND
I don't care about her now that
you're
here. She was just a lure.
(he let's go of her)
It's hard to get a meeting with
you,
young man.
MJ goes to Spider Man. She seems
to be okay.
Strand comes over to them. He gestures
to the world laid
out at Peter's feet, like it's something
he made just for
him. The city glitters like a billion
jewels, as far as
the eye can see.
STRAND
Relax, kid. I just want to talk.
SPIDER MAN
About what?
STRAND
About you. About your career. Think
of me
as a kind of guidance counselor.
So let's
take your chosen field... hero.
See? Bad
choice. I'm recommending against
it.
SPIDER MAN
It's not up to you.
Strand goes to the window and looks
down. He puts his
hands on his hips, surveying the
world below like some
wise lord.
STRAND
Think about it. You can't save the
world.
Why? Because you can't save people
from
themselves... from their own brutal
and
venal natures. You're either a predator
of prey in this world. A killer
or a
victim. People are by nature violent,
stupid, confused, greedy. Why waste
your
gift on the ungrateful masses, who
would
love to see your mask ripped off
and see
you dragged through the slime. The
only
thing they love more than a hero
is to
see that hero fail, fall, screw-up...
to
see him exposed in a scandal, arrested
with his pants down, caught with
his
hands in the till. You know why?
It lets
them feel better about their own
miserable lives.
He turns dramatically to face Spider
Man. He moves
closer, his voice hypnotic.
STRAND
It's a myth that people need heroes.
People hate heroes! Heroes make
them feel
bad! By creating examples they can
never
live up to. As long as the media
can show,
day after day, that the people they
respect and admire are just as twisted
inside as they are... they're reassured.
They can sleep at night. They can
face
their puffy faces in the mirror
in the
morning.
MJ looks at Spider Man. It is impossible
to read his
expression through the mask from
her perspective (though
by clever lighting we will be able
to see the uncertainty
in his eyes).
STRAND
Misery loves company. And everybody's
miserable. You run around in your
long
underwear coming off to them like
some
holier than thou saint, Mr. My Socks
Don't Smell... you're heading for
a big
fall. They hate you.
Strand step up to Peter.
STRAND
I want this to work out. You're
a smart
kid. Like those phony bracelets.
That was
a good idea.
PETER
(alarmed)
What are you talking about?
Strand puts his hands on Peter's shoulders.
STRAND
Son. I know your secret. See...
I had the
web material you left all over my
living
room analyzed. It's real spider
silk.
He grabs Peter's wrist and rips off
the fake wrist-
shooters. Looks closely at his wrists.
Bends the hand
back, forcing the spinneret to poke
out a little. Mary
Jane looks a little shocked at that
one. Peter sees the
fear in her eyes and his will seems
to collapse. He sees
the everything she feels for him
changing in a second.
It's true. He is a freak. He is
no longer human.
STRAND
You can take off the costume, but
you
will always be the Spider Man.
SPIDER MAN
It's just Spider Man.
STRAND
The point is, you are not a hero.
You are
a spider. It's something you don't
have a
choice in. And spiders are predators.
They kill to live. They kill to
live.
They are not hampered by humanitarian
ideals or impeded in their lethal
efficiency by delusions of morality.
They
are pure. Powerful. As God made
them.
There are no merciful spiders. There
are
no vegetarian spiders. It is now
time for
you to face and accept your true
nature.
Strand turns again to the window,
this time putting his
arm around Peter's shoulders. Father
and son, staring
down at the world they can own.
STRAND
Join me. Together we can shake this
two-bit planet down for its last
nickel.
Take what is rightfully yours. You
have
been given a great gift, for a reason.
Do
not squander it.
Peter stares out at the vista for
a long time. It all
makes so much sense. And it seems
to explain so much of
what he feels. All this churning
confusion.
Strand gestures to Boyd, who walks
to a shape in the
shadows nearby. Its about the size
of two refrigerators
and its covered by a tarp. Boyd
pulls back the tarp to
reveal...
Money. Neatly stacked bankslipped,
piles of hundreds.
Six feet tall by eight feet long.
Mary Jane gasps.
STRAND
Of course I seldom carry cash, but
I had
Boyd bring this for demonstration
purposes. Much more dramatic than
a bank
statement, wouldn't you say?
MARY JANE
How much is it?
STRAND
It's about... what is it, Boyd?
BOYD
Two hundred and fifty.
MARY JANE
Thousand?
STRAND
(insulted)
Million, dear girl. Million. It's
all I
had lying around on such short notice.
(to Spider Man)
Of course it's chump change compared
to
what you and I could do together.
It's
out there. All we have to do is
take it.
You know how I get this? It's a
half a
cent here, a half a cent there...
electronic transactions taking place
a
million times a second... all over
the
world. And nobody misses it. That's
the
beauty.
SPIDER MAN
You know, I took some money once.
It was
easy. It was just sitting there.
It was
the solution to all my problems,
and
there was nobody to stop me. Nobody
could
touch me. So I took it. And you
know what
I found out?
STRAND
What, son?
SPIDER MAN
That there is a line you don't cross.
And
that sometimes you only find the
line by
tripping over it the first time
you cross
it. But once you do, you always
know
right where it is.
STRAND
Oh, please! Next you're going to
tell me
you gave the money back.
SPIDER MAN
More or less.
STRAND
This is a disappointment.
SPIDER MAN
Listen, you want to talk about fate?
Maybe there is a reason for all
this.
Maybe I was put here to stop guys
like
you when nobody else has the balls.
BOYD
Pretty tough talk for a guy in a
danceskin.
Strand moves without warning, grabbing
Mary Jane before
Peter can pull her away. She feels
the current running
through her. Peter lunges forward
and Strand turns up the
juice. Mary Jane cries out.
Peter stops. He can only watch helplessly
as Strand toys
with her life. Strand grabs her
head and kisses her. The
voltage makes her hair shoot straight
out. She starts
doing the watusi.
STRAND
See how power turns women on?
He breaks the kiss. She slaps the
shit out of him and he
kisses her again, this time at a
much higher voltage. MJ
starts to convulse wildly.
Meanwhile, Sandman has dissolved
and is flowing across the
floor. He reforms behind Peter and
grabs him in a grip of
solid rock. Peter struggles as Strand
electrocutes MJ.
She bucks and goes still. Her head
falls back and Peter
sees her staring eyes, pupils fixed
and dilated.
Dead as they come. Peter can only
stare in horror.
STRAND
Mmmm. What should we do? Call 911?
PETER
I'll kill you! Motherfucker! You
hear
me?! You're dead, you sick bastard!
STRAND
See! That's my point exactly! You
are a
killer, kid. You've got it in you.
Why
don't you accept it? You want to
rip my
throat out right now.
Strand puts his hand on Mary Jane's
sternum and zaps her
with a defibrillating pulse. She
arches, then relaxes.
Her chest starts to move. She opens
her eyes, weakly,
seeing Strand looking down at her.
STRAND
I think there's real electricity
between
us, don't you?
Peter goes berserk.
He fires webs at MJ, jerking her
out of Strand's arms
before he can react. Then...
Mustering all his force, he EXPLODES
the Sandman into
loose chunks, which rain down around
the room.
He dives out of the way of Strand's
first bolt of
lightning, which sets a wall on
fire...
Peter tackles MJ and scoops her
up...
Diving right through the glass,
a quarter mile up...
Her scream vanishes on the wind.
Sandman chunks dissolve into puddles
of sand and quickly
flow together... forming back into
a human shape. Strand,
in a fury runs to the window, looking
down. No sign of
Spider Man. Looking up he catches
a glimpse of a figure
leaping from one tower to the next...
carrying MJ to
safety. He fires a lightning bolt
which sears the night.
It explodes glass out of the north
tower.
ON THE ROOF of the tower, Spider
Man gets MJ to the
stairwell door. He rips it off its
hinges and he tells
her to run. She starts down. Then
turns back to him.
MARY JANE
I love you.
SPIDER MAN
Cool.
He turns to see...
Across the gap, on the outdoor deck
of the south tower,
Sandman and Strand come out the
door. Strand fires
lightning bolts across to the other
roof, blasting debris
into the air. Peter knows enough
not to leap onto the
microwave tower... a natural lightning
rod.
Strand summons a furious force field
of electromagnetic
energy, like a sorcerer calling
up a demon. The fiercely
glowing plasma leaps across to the
base of the microwave
mast on the north tower. It starts
to glow cherry red.
Concentrating, he uses the electromagnetic
force to bend
the microwave tower toward him.
It topples, falling across the gap.
Bridging the two
towers.
Sandman leaps onto the bridge and
runs across to Spider
Man.
THE FINAL BATTLE IS JOINED.
And it's a real barn-burner. Vicious
and elemental.
I won't bore you with the details
right now, but it's big.
Some of the highlight:
A major slug-fest with Sandman, during
which...
They pound each other mercilessly
and reduce every object
in sight to junk...
Peter is pummelled, his costume
ripped half off...
Sandman gets spread around and reforms...
All the while, Strand is ripping
open the power panel next
to the huge roof fans...
Pulling out the 440 volt main cables...
And FEEDING off the power...
Screaming to high heaven as the
energy blasts through him
and...
A brown-out darkens the whole lower
half of Manhattan...
And Strand conjures a writhing,
living field of blinding
blue-white force around him. It
lifts objects into the
air and melts the steel railing
near him. The power of
his mind to control the electromagnetic
forces has grown
exponentially.
Sandman pounds Spidey into semi-consciousness.
Hurls him
off the roof...
But he catches a web and pulls himself
back up, like one
of those spiders you can't get to
stay down the drain...
Spidey sees Strand readying a mega-blast...
He leaps as the bolt rips along
the edge of the roof...
Blasting glass into space and fusing
the steel in a
glowing track a yard wide.
Spidey sees that Strand is about
to fire again...
He fires a web at Sandman, lassoing
him...
Just as Stand unleashes a bolt...
Spidey drops over the edge, pulling
the web taut...
Jerking Sandman, screaming, right
into the path of the
lightning beam...
The furious bright plasma wraps
over the Sandman...
Fusing him into molten glass.
Strand swears and runs across the
bridge to the north
tower.
Sandman is a smoking lump of melted
glass in the vague
form of a man. Poised, cooling,
in a position of agony.
Like Michaelangelo's dying slave.
His glass mouth is a
shapeless pit of eternal pain.
Bummer.
Strand looks around and in a fury.
Spider Man appears around the superstructure
of the tower
with a fire-hose. He unleashes a
stream of water at
Strand just as he is summoning a
surge of power.
It shorts, and there is a tremendous
steam explosion.
They are both hurled several yards.
Spider Man comes up running and
dives at Strand, smashing
him brutally across the face...
Pummelling him even as Strand shoots
pulses into Peter's
body which cause him to scream and
writhe in agony.
Peter is hurled back against a wall...
He is crumpled on the ground, his
costume in smoking
rags...
And Strand, unsteady and bleeding,
advances.
Strand summons his amperage for a
single, lethal blast.
The veins stand out on his neck
and forehead. This is the
big one...
And Peter raises his head, his eyes
steady...
They lock eyes...
And in the blink of an eye...
Strand fires. Peter leaps. In midair
he tags Strand with
a loop of web and sails past him...
Over the edge...
Jerking Strand with him, over the
side...
And they fall together, down the
face of the tower...
Strand screams, unleashing bolts
of power in all
directions...
From a distance it looks like some
kind of fantastic
Jacob's Ladder as the arcs light
up the gap between the
two towers.
Strand's death fall is one of the
most beautiful displays
ever seen, like a symmetrical release
of the energy which
created him out of art and the elements.
Falling... Peter, fighting for consciousness,
fires webs
at the wall...
And one finally sticks...
But it breaks. They're going too
fast...
He fires one at the far tower, fifty
feet away...
It grabs...
And he swings toward the tower...
Slamming against it as the line
pulls taut...
HOLDING. Jerking him to a stop,
from a hundred miles an
hour to zero in one second...
And Strand rockets past him, still
falling...
Peter holds the web with all his
might...
Stopping Strand so suddenly that
he slams into the steel
columns along the side of the building
with a sickening
smack.
The lightning stops suddenly.
A few stray arcs as Strand's broken
body dangles at the
end of Peter's line. The sound of
sirens wafts up from
the street far below.
OBSERVATION FLOOR, SOUTH TOWER: It
is the window Peter
shattered leaping out with Mary
Jane.
He climbs painfully up into view.
Moving slowly, he
swings in until he is on the floor.
He pulls up on the
taut lifeline, dragging a semi-conscious
Strand up into
the building. He lays him out on
the floor.
Strand is bleeding badly, and broken
inside. Dying.
Peter's mask is ripped half off
by the fight. He pulls it
off his head, showing his face to
Strand for the first
time.
STRAND
What's your name kid?
PETER
Parker. Peter Parker.
STRAND
Peter Parker. So... what're you?
Senior
in high school?
PETER
Yeah. I graduate next week.
Strand chuckles weakly, coughing blood from ruptured lungs.
STRAND
Unbelievable.
He dies.
Peter sags, spent. Then he sees the
pallet of money.
Two hundred and fifty million dollars.
Stolen a half a cent at a time from
a billion accounts all
over the world. Impossible to give
back.
What the heck.
People don't notice the cloud at
first.
A green cloud, covering the city...
a cloud of hundred
dollar bills fluttering out across
the city on a brisk
breeze. Spreading for miles.
But New York notices when it reached
the street. From
Central Park to the Battery, it
is one big street party.
On a warm evening, the first night
of summer, it's raining
hundred dollar bills as far as the
eye can see.
CUT TO: SPIDER MAN hanging in his eyrie.
SPIDER MAN
Well, when they rebuilt the radio
tower,
I sort of made it my favorite hang.
The
money? Cute trick, huh? Like I said,
there's more than one way to be
a saint.
Did it save the world? Naw. It probably
didn't save anybody. Except maybe
me.
CUT TO PETER, at school. It is the
end of the schoolyear.
He has a lot of bruises. He tells
them he fell off his
moped.
They think he's a putz.
MJ is back too. She is very quiet.
She doesn't hang with
any of her old friends. They think
she's odd now. She
doesn't care.
SPIDER MAN (V.O.)
There was still the small matter
of the
woman I loved...
Peter and MJ get their grade on the
science project. A+.
He is happy for her that she will
graduate with a B and
get her car. But she doesn't care
about that anymore.
She's decided to go to a different
collage, get her grades
up, and then go to med-school.
She thanks him for helping her see
the wonder of things.
She kisses him. And whoa... wait
a minute. Why does that
kiss seem so familiar? Peter is
smiling. Not a geek.
But confident. Even, somehow...
charming.
PETER
Mary Jane. Close your eyes.
She does. Puzzled. He moves very close to her.
PETER
(in Spidey voice)
Do you still trust me?
She gasps and her eyes pop open...
staring at him. Then
she gulps, nods once and squeezes
them shut. He kisses
her long and deep, and she twines
her fingers in his hair.
Two of MJ's snotnose girlfriends
are walking by. They
just stare, shocked.
MJ breaks, staring at him in wonder.
MARY JANE
My God, Peter. Are you really him?
I mean--
PETER
Shhhh!
It is what everybody secretly hopes
for... that someday
someone will see past the face that
everyone sees to their
secret self -- what is inside and
hidden. Peter grins,
and she returns it.
They go back into the kiss, just
as...
Flash grabs Peter by the shoulder
and spins him around.
He can't believe it's true. MJ with
this pencil-neck. He
tells Peter to walk with him a second
and Peter shrugs.
Sure. He turns back to Mary Jane.
PETER
When two male wolf spiders, Pardosa,
encounter one another in the presence
of
a female, they assume ritual threat
postures.
MJ smirks. Her eyes merry. Poor Flash.
Flash drags Peter by his arm around
the corner.
He whirls on Peter without warning,
with a lightning
roundhouse. But of course Peter
ducks and Flash hits a
brick wall.
PETER
Careful, Flash. You could sprain
something.
Howling in pain, Flash holds his
hand, then charges again.
Peter steps aside, and Flash roars
past. In the blink of
an eye Peter shoots a tiny strand
of web to a nearby
railing. Flash rushes him, tripping
on the silk, and
cartwheels into a wall.
PETER
Flash, you should really watch your
step.
Here, let me help you up.
Peter helps Flash to his feet, surreptitiously
attaching a
web to the back of his jacket. He
shoots the other end to
a nearby railing. Peter dusts Flash
off and turns,
walking away. Flash roars and charges...
only to get
jerked short like a mean dog on
a short chain. His feet
fly out from under him and he crashes
on his back. Dazed.
All the kids standing around the
schoolyard laugh
uproariously. Peter grins and holds
up his hands.
PETER
I never laid a glove on him. I swear.
Everybody cheers. Because the truth
is: we really do like
heroes. Especially when they're
underdogs.
CUT TO SPIDER MAN: STILL HANGING.
SPIDER MAN
Mary Jane and I got accepted to
different
colleges. Wouldn't you know it?
But we
see each other every weekend. Her
grades
are better than mine, but I blame
it on
the heavy hours. It's not easy being
your
friendly neighborhood Spider Man.
Takes
it out of you. Well, it's a schoolnight.
Gotta fly. Be good.
He pushes off from the mast... swinging
in an arc out over
the edge of the roof. Paying out
web-line he drops like
an express elevator toward the street
far below.
TILTING DOWN to follow as he becomes
a black dot above the
sea of lights. A tiny spider going
home.
THE END